tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post1310606760436355050..comments2024-01-21T03:26:23.301-05:00Comments on Musings: Writing Exercisessagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-51609273673890187632007-04-08T21:40:00.000-04:002007-04-08T21:40:00.000-04:00OK, so I'm almost positive I left a comment on thi...OK, so I'm almost positive I left a comment on this days ago, and then it disappeared into that deep yawning chasm where lost comments are gathered, just waiting to be read.<BR/><BR/>I echo others' sentiments, that I was amazed. It's excellent.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-71036605085338634342007-04-07T14:52:00.000-04:002007-04-07T14:52:00.000-04:00You don't wipe your fingers after cheese puffs! Y...You don't wipe your fingers after cheese puffs! You let it cake up on them and then when you're done, you lick (or depending on how many you've eaten, sucking may need to be involved) them off. That's the best.Murfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859630977737647681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-1863967797679814052007-04-07T11:50:00.000-04:002007-04-07T11:50:00.000-04:00Wow. Stellar poem. But I'm not surprised. Sage,...Wow. Stellar poem. But I'm not surprised. Sage, you're a wonderful writer and this blog is a joy to many.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing such an excellent poem with the rest of us.vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18308061674357594371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-85061683755997936632007-04-07T11:01:00.000-04:002007-04-07T11:01:00.000-04:00I think poetry is one of the most...intimate style...I think poetry is one of the most...intimate styles of writing.<BR/>And what you've written is perfect for Sylvia Plath.<BR/>Excellent!!! I really enjoyed it.<BR/><BR/>Hello, Michele sent me!Shannon akaMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00379928121511251819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-12579087474003949302007-04-07T08:00:00.000-04:002007-04-07T08:00:00.000-04:00I've visited this post before; an excellent poem.H...I've visited this post before; an excellent poem.<BR/><BR/>Here via Michele.Jean-Luc Picardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689798190618944262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-57717800416814556172007-04-07T07:52:00.000-04:002007-04-07T07:52:00.000-04:00No Sage there not one and the same lolNice poem an...No Sage there not one and the same lol<BR/><BR/>Nice poem <BR/><BR/>and thanx for the comment ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15776021354918253930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-90457160549558859872007-04-06T22:02:00.000-04:002007-04-06T22:02:00.000-04:00murf, subtle definitions!Pia, thanks. Like Murf, ...murf, subtle definitions!<BR/><BR/>Pia, thanks. Like Murf, I'm amazed that you spent a weekend studying who's related to whom within the royal family<BR/><BR/><BR/>Capt. Thanks<BR/><BR/>Murf, Cheese Puffs? that just makes your pants yellow (from wipping 'em)<BR/><BR/>Kontan, me, on stage, nah, unless it's a reading, I don't do music in publicsagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-82598325636316303412007-04-06T19:56:00.000-04:002007-04-06T19:56:00.000-04:00impressed...so when's your first performance?impressed...so when's your first performance?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-26603699377100243422007-04-06T14:16:00.000-04:002007-04-06T14:16:00.000-04:00Pia, I hope there were lots of alcohol and cheese ...Pia, I hope there were lots of alcohol and cheese puffs to make that lineage memorizing weekend the least bit of fun. :-)Murfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859630977737647681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-3524268492857273142007-04-06T14:04:00.000-04:002007-04-06T14:04:00.000-04:00An excellent poem about Sylvia Plath. It has high ...An excellent poem about Sylvia Plath. It has high standard.<BR/><BR/>Michele sent me here.Jean-Luc Picardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689798190618944262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-89891686227803193852007-04-06T12:52:00.000-04:002007-04-06T12:52:00.000-04:00SageI had no idea that you were such a good poet.I...Sage<BR/>I had no idea that you were such a good poet.<BR/><BR/>I'm speechless and amazed<BR/><BR/>That dead princess taught me a lot. I'm an expert on who is your second cousin, first cousin once removed etc., due to my friends and I once spending a long weekend memorizing a People/Princess Di special edition on lineage.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-2613500178361959482007-04-06T09:15:00.000-04:002007-04-06T09:15:00.000-04:00Gee and I had forgotten all about her. Thanks for...Gee and I had forgotten all about her. Thanks for reminding me again, Sage. And for the record, I never called you a cheater. I just questioned whether what you did was cheating or not. ;-)Murfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859630977737647681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-64055530705713677472007-04-06T08:33:00.000-04:002007-04-06T08:33:00.000-04:00Michelle & Remiman: thanks for stopping byMurf, Do...Michelle & Remiman: thanks for stopping by<BR/><BR/>Murf, Don't take it too personally, just consider it payback for Linda! ;-)<BR/><BR/>Thanks Deana.sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-27392207144699946802007-04-06T08:12:00.000-04:002007-04-06T08:12:00.000-04:00Wow Sage...there are so many layers to you! Very ...Wow Sage...there are so many layers to you! Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-68886780845646446492007-04-06T06:43:00.000-04:002007-04-06T06:43:00.000-04:00Ouch. Way to put me back in my place.Ouch. Way to put me back in my place.Murfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859630977737647681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-86988180678342169912007-04-06T04:19:00.000-04:002007-04-06T04:19:00.000-04:00I think you've captured the essence of Plath quite...I think you've captured the essence of Plath quite well.<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-55500281452877879452007-04-05T18:42:00.000-04:002007-04-05T18:42:00.000-04:00Very interesting use of the three suggested words....Very interesting use of the three suggested words. I liked this.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01179554243504691744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-43352135337635591222007-04-05T17:51:00.000-04:002007-04-05T17:51:00.000-04:00Murf, my ego may be enlarged, but you can rest ass...Murf, my ego may be enlarged, but you can rest assured that you're not to blame!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Pat!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Diane. I think you are right, I was trying not to use linger twice, but the parallelism might strength the poem<BR/><BR/>Arlene, thanks for having the links to Bone's 3WW! <BR/><BR/>Bookbinds, thanks for stopping by. I also like Sexton's poetry, especially "the Awful rowing toward God"sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-53188715183646012282007-04-05T16:22:00.000-04:002007-04-05T16:22:00.000-04:00Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton's life have always fa...Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton's life have always fascinated me so much tragedy and melancholy in two gifted women who seemed to have everything. Your poem really captured this sense of lost hope. The last line was particularly powerful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-33122553300381911362007-04-05T16:14:00.000-04:002007-04-05T16:14:00.000-04:00A cynic indeed!I loved your poem! I don't know po...A cynic indeed!<BR/>I loved your poem! I don't know poetry past what I learned in high school, so I just go with what I think sounds good, and yours sounds good :-)<BR/>Thanks for stopping by mine :-)Arlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01935225784193047899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-75039931720284356972007-04-05T15:30:00.000-04:002007-04-05T15:30:00.000-04:00nicely done, though may I suggest lingers in place...nicely done, though may I suggest lingers in place of loiters? I have a book of Plath's poems, I need to actually read itDianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15552248284380193013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-52738358797677692852007-04-05T13:24:00.000-04:002007-04-05T13:24:00.000-04:00I'd love to see what you could do if you studied i...I'd love to see what you could do if you studied it some. This is one fine poem!! You should consider sending this out for publication.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-13552996560056108822007-04-05T12:04:00.000-04:002007-04-05T12:04:00.000-04:00I hate making that ego of yours bigger but after t...I hate making that ego of yours bigger but after the occasional nagging over the last year about your lack of poems, I have to give you your props (as the kids say). That was very good. I need to come up with a special day...Murfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859630977737647681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-12906493654538983112007-04-05T11:52:00.000-04:002007-04-05T11:52:00.000-04:00thanks PeriGautami, Thanks for your suggestion--I ...thanks Peri<BR/><BR/>Gautami, Thanks for your suggestion--I hope I left a permalink, so of this technology stuff is beyond me. Thanks for your post in Poetry Thursday which gave me the idea...sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9454941.post-8543252672471366362007-04-05T11:16:00.000-04:002007-04-05T11:16:00.000-04:00PS: Please click it and jst leave the permalink of...PS: Please click it and jst leave the permalink of this post there.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.com